I have to say that I like this one a lot better than the other one. Maybe it is just because it is zoomed out more, but I do actually feel something different from the expression. I think the eyes are open a little wider and the mouth closed a little more. It's all minor differences, but they add up to a better impression I think. The color tinting difference also helps and I like it better here again. I think I even like the more clothes. Obviously you couldn't really do this one with less considering age, good taste, and such, but even if you could I think it is better as is. There is more of an allure from not seeing. Lets the mind get more involved. I also think it just balances well with your hair. Keeps the dark flowing downward and ties it together better which wouldn't be the case without the clothes. You picked good clothes for it too cause the sporadic lines mesh well with your hair.
So yeah, I like it! Better than the other even though it is similar. : )