Teemage Dream

The angle of this picture taken seems disadvantegous for the model (in this case yourself). Parts of the picture seem to be overexposed, on the other hand there are to edgy shadows cast on your body (like your legs or in your face. Also the shadow on the white wall is kinda disturbing (but I know there are photographers and artists that do play around with that). Your second arm seems to be totaly disappeared, I think your posing is nice and looks dynamic but the missing arm kinda is disturbing (but that may be my personal opinion <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> )

Don´t get this to wrong but I think you can do much better! Try to step a little further away from the wall and don´t use a flash directed straight at you (try to set it to the ceeling, so the light can spread itself through the room). That should avoid sharp shades <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/>